How widely do you think the problem spreads that people spend too much time on work than their personal life and experience time shortage? What problems will it cause?
The idea of maintaining balance between work and family life is widely debated with many people claiming that the benefits it offers are no match for it’s drawbacks. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
One of the most conspicuous aspects is that the shortage of time leads to family problems and damages relationship. Not only does unbalance life create disputes between the partners often leading to divorce, but it also leads to stress and pressure due to work load and project pressure. Needless to say, all these demerits have a far-reaching impact on people’s lives.
Another pivotal aspect of the argument is that in order to make a prominent place in the market, people work hard and spend extra time at work place and ignore their personal lives. It is very necessary to keep balance between work and personal life. Furthermore, sitting at the same place can result in so many physical problem like back pain and many more. Hence, it is apparent why many emphasis on a balanced life between work and family.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the drawbacks of spending too much time on work are indeed too dire to ignore.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 1207.87684729 83% => OK
No of words: 209.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50346706774 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612440191388 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7695965151 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.7 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282172062264 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986020950237 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574055278582 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15401063403 0.151781067708 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345674407342 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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