How widely of you think the problem spreads that people spend too much time on work than their personal life and experience time shortage? What problems will it cause?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is that people generally get less time to spend with family as they are more occupied with work. There is widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of problems for people who are busy in their work and do not maintain the balance between work and family. In my opinion, this apprehension is unwarranted and so should be rejected. In this essay, I will discuss the drawbacks of failing in maintenance of work-life balance.
To begin with, the consequences of neglecting work-life balance are more dangerous as people get lots of health issues. In this competitive world, one has to be more indulged in work as a part of his/her job resulting in bad health. Eventually, they get a lot of diseases while doing so much work. In addition to this, there is too much stress in the office these days which is another cause of health deterioration. For example, in information technology-related jobs, one has to sit for long hours to accomplish his/her work that led to health problems.
Moreover, spending a long time at the workplace also gives less time for children that hampers their upbringing as they feel no restrictions from parents. For instance, children keep themselves busy in mobile games until their parents ask them to stop. In my opinion, people must get time for their family to spend quality time with them and also rejuvenate themselves.
In view or arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the demerits of spending too much time in office rather than home will lead to many problems.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83703703704 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74360210995 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551851851852 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8030583281 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.461538462 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273383006462 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09348249527 0.0925447433944 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613670039807 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166374827157 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382494144032 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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