The importance of cars and airplanes in modern life. Give examples.
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trend to see prodigies discussing the fact that In this contemporary world, cars and airplanes are the most essential innovations for every individual. In this essay, I shall highlight some of the benefits of of these transports before deducing any conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments discussing this statement that cars and planes are the essentials of today’s world. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stem from the fact that people can enjoy peaceful journey with their family and friends in their personel cars. Moreover, it is now easy to catch a flight for domestic and local travelling to meet the people at any time and almost at anywhere. As a prime example, from recent years, tourism industry has promoted to greater extent after innovation of airplanes, where people can spend their vacations in beautiful states of the world.
On the other hand, another pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that with the passage of time and establishment of private aircraft, fairs are quiet reasonable for general public to travel in an emergency situations and for business dealings through out the world.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that airplanes and cars are now more essential then considered luxuries in past. Thus, ideas that will bring benefit would be cordially welcomed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, thus, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29147982063 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77133672898 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636771300448 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2926212042 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.111111111 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0657389559795 0.242375264174 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0299952428046 0.0925447433944 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449859635774 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0455902066874 0.151781067708 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366807240965 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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