In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge among the prodigies discussing the fact that in this contemporary world, people are more dependant on credit and debit cards instead of using cash. In this essay, I shall highlight some of the advantages and disadvantages of this statement before deducing any conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of argument discussing the fact that usage of credit cards are harmful for the society. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stem from the fact that people might sometimes get in real trouble, when buying something from local shops where cash is the only payment method. Moreover, cyber crime and hackers are increasingly hacked someones account and steal money from accounts. As a prime example, this practice is largely observed in current society and mostly in developed nations.
On the other hand, another pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that benefit of having a credit card is an easy access for every one to shop at any time and from every where. In addition, carrying credit card avoids the tension of carrying huge money and this would lead to avoid the incidence of robbery and snatching.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that benefits of having credit card triumph over it’s demerits. Therefore, ideas that will bring benefits would be cordially welcomed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27064220183 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6050240221 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633027522936 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4273963829 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.9 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202544786565 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717100062567 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641579683781 0.071462118173 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118506271067 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940935026779 0.0609392437508 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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