Whether design of building will have a positive or negative impact on people’s life and work?
Of late, a colossal upsurge in the trend to see prodigies discussing the fact that there is a strong influence of building design on individual’s life. Critics, however, claim that this perception is nothing else than a simple myth. I, personally believe that former statement is more realistic and worth to believe. In this essay, I shall highlight some of the impacts of art and architecture of building on human psychology.
At the outset, there are myriad of argument discussing the fact that design of building would negatively or positively effect it’s residents. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stem from the fact huge and open ended buildings good ventilation sooths one’s feeling every day. Moreover, residential buildings in perfect location and with favorable design directly effects the nature of people who are their residents.As a prime example, being a parent, i would prefer to live in apartment which is specifically design to include maximum of the facilities for my little ones. Therefore, I would love to prefer prefer building, which is designed according to the modern needs.
On the other hand, another pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that people who are living in congested buildings with shortage of basic facilities spend maximum of their time in struggling to correct that disorders. Hence, maximum of their mind is deviated towards these worries and this would result in depression and anxiety.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that suitable design of building is mandatory to make people’s mind peaceful and calm. Therefore, ideas that will bring benefit would be cordially welcomed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48076923077 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93110991357 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611538461538 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9027026446 50.4703680194 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.75 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265723441066 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862494799143 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075833113094 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143794180123 0.151781067708 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587242024612 0.0609392437508 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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