The importance of cars and airplanes in modern life. Give examples.
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trend to see prodigies discussing the fact that in this contemporary world, airplanes and cars are the most important needs to travel across the world. Critics, however, claim that these technological advancements are nothing more than luxuries. I, personally believe that the former argument is more realistic and worth to believe. In this essay, I shall highlight the importance of these present day needs before deducing any conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments discussing the fact that airplanes and personal cars are the necessities of modern society. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stem from the fact that car owner can be able to enjoy quality time with family and friends by avoiding congested crowd while driving. Moreover, he can enjoy the freedom of listening music of own choice by sitting comfortably in car. Furthermore, airplanes are the most suitable facility to travel across the world. As a prime example, national and international are the feasible and the quickest way to travel from one place to another in short period of time.
Another, pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that despite long term benefits of these modes of travelling, we also admit that personal cars are not the healthy alternates than cycles and walk. In addition, due emission of gases from fuel burning, it creates global warming and leads to serious health issues, which include, heart diseases and respiratory disorders.
To recapitulate, cars and airplanes are the most beneficial modes of travelling and necessary for every individual. Therefore, ideas that will bring benefits would be cordially welcomed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76308459667 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6795756097 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.076923077 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17244283246 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571762315879 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619889412964 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093734923002 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397562670955 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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