Information revolution has changed the way of mass communications and had some negative and positive effects on individual lives as well as on society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In these days, there is no denying the reality that the advancement of information has altered the way of mass communications. While many people believe that the change brings about positive impacts to people’s life, other feels that the opposite is also correct. This essay offers some insights on both merits and demerits of the development.
Perhaps the greatest benefit people can enjoy from the information revolution is the easy access to a huge source of data and information. As the matter of fact, newspaper was the only source of mass communication in the older days. With the advent of the internet, TV and radio, people can get access to the information at their convenience by a few simple clicks. Another advantage is the communication capability, which enables people to keep in touch with their friends and stay connected with the world regardless of their physical distance. To give an illustration, online social networks such as Facebook and Yahoo have succeeded in connecting thousands of people around the globe.
Nonetheless, like two sides of the same coin, the information advancement also creates many problems. The most obvious negative impact is the confusion caused by misleading information. This is due to the fact that the information shared on the internet is not censored and validated. As a consequence, the general public is easy influenced and deceived by incorrect pieces of information, which results in aggressive behaviour.
In conclusion, from the above analysis, it is obvious that while information revolution allows people to enjoy great benefits, it also brings about many drawbacks to other’s lives and the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ed and validated. As a consequence, the general public is easy influenced and deceived by inco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, nonetheless, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 5.75862068966 347% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32706766917 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02058486931 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582706766917 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0725368378 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141251644638 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468224175919 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329144533699 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854824901176 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270435951962 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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