It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, it is increasingly acknowledged that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is one of the biggest issues which people are facing. While some people believe that it can be acceptable, others advocate that it may cause some problems. As far as I am concerned, it is not a good choice to get married before finishing school or getting a job, which can be supported by the reasons as follows.
It is reasonable for me to believe that getting married before finishing school or getting a job can create a financial burden, which is obvious because the couple does not have a stable income. Various aspects of life incur costs for the married couple when supporting a family, such as buying a house or purchasing a vehicle, thus put a lot of stress on the couple. To further support the above statement, my brother got married when he was a second-year undergraduate student but they kept asking their parents for money because the couple was unable to afford their daily bills as they lacked stable income.
Besides, the second justification for this view is that the couple is unable to take on family responsibilities under high pressure, which is reasonable because they are not mature enough. Young people are mentally immature and easily become sensitive and emotional when facing the stress of life thus cause conflicts or arguments. This can be supported by the recent study by Oxford University which stated that 76% of young couple divorces because of quarrels caused by family chores.
In a nutshell, although this controversial topic never fails to attract public attention, we may safely conclude that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, second, so, thus, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 5.94088669951 252% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96885813149 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71575822344 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.1581249514 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.6 104.977214359 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9 20.9669160288 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287893634713 0.242375264174 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137924905402 0.0925447433944 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162927900483 0.071462118173 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206966685612 0.151781067708 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144495575396 0.0609392437508 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.1260098522 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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