It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. Some people believe that the year off is a waste of time while others believe that it is necessary.Choose which position you most agree with and discu

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. Some people believe that the year off is a waste of time while others believe that it is necessary.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.

Children’s acts and actions are directly influenced by their parents. As we all know that children are the shadow of parents and replicate them in terms of physical actions. This phenomenon raises a question whether parents should be held accountable for the maneuver performed by children’s. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I would elaborate my experience and would lead to a logical conclusion.

In the context of the first notion, parent’s actions catalyze the acts conducted by children’s. Imagine a home where care takes are indulged in daily fights offensive and stringent exertion than this is directly impacting the behavior of children are they are learning from what they are watching. Similarly, when fostering the adolescents in a positive environment, they tend to become more socially presentable. Mother and Father should nurture their child in a healthy and virtuous environment.

Secondly, considering my personal experience, parents should be held accountable for the misconduct commenced by child's only if it is linked to the activities deployed at home. Children’s are going to the school and might be involved in any of the criminal activities buy bad influential children’s, who might ask them in perform tasks which is entirely unacceptable such as drugs and cigarette smoking.

To sum up, I would like to encapsulate that foregoing discussion will propounds to the view that children spend most of their time at home, but, parents cannot be completely being encompassed for the misbehaves conducted by child. Although, care taker can monitor the actions held by youngsters and notice any abnormal deeds that indicate the intricating with the improper and unjustifiable actions.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'propound'
Suggestion: propound
...apsulate that foregoing discussion will propounds to the view that children spend most of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, such as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55639097744 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26665555247 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616541353383 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4410996705 50.4703680194 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.166666667 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.25397266985 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0358115013732 0.242375264174 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0124138255265 0.0925447433944 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0188983925043 0.071462118173 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.023336118242 0.151781067708 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01486538998 0.0609392437508 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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