Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
Small shops are continuously decreasing as a result of large shopping malls. While some people believe local stores should give place for larger shops others maintain that small shops should remain where they belong.
At some point in the near future large businesses will supersede small shops and outperform them on every possible service. Entrepreneurs are becoming increasingly unstoppable at an extremely rapid pace. Every few months, for example, new business centres are delivered. As a result of this exponential growth, there is no reason why large shops will not eventually replace small stores.
Secondly, large corporations are dominantly taking smaller businesses places. Certainly, cities are growing smartly and bringing development which requires small business to move to another places, such as the new Shopping Mall in Sunshine Coast. As a result of this, large corporations win showing their dominance.
In summary, Small businesses are suffering a dramatic fall in numbers when giving place to large shopping mall. The replacement of small shops is clearly being made by large companies.
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...businesses places. Certainly, cities are growing smartly and bringing development...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, secondly, so, while, for example, in summary, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 20.9802955665 29% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 31.9359605911 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 1207.87684729 78% => OK
No of words: 170.0 242.827586207 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54117647059 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.92707691288 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74236278293 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670588235294 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 379.143842365 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.515984626 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6363636364 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4545454545 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268323638214 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114451694114 0.0925447433944 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773069350681 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17762452321 0.151781067708 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458156231171 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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