Large shopping malls are superseding small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
The importance of small shops, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of large shopping malls has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on small shopkeeper's income in recent years. It can be agreed that large shopping malls in big cities are killing other individual small business, but some people claim that it has nothing to deal with malls. This essay will elaborate how shopkeeper and malls are affecting each other and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why huge malls are taking business from small shops but the most conspicuous one steam on the fact that people can get everything at one place in mega malls. Nowadays, everyone is being lazy and try to find a place where they can get all grocery shopping. For example, Coles and Aldi are popular in Australia even though they are charging bit more than local suppliers.
On the contrary, some people adopted an opposing view and tend to believe that how can big malls take business from small shops. Malls are charging extra money for everything such as food, electronics items, cinemas, and parking. For instance, Brisbane city has many big malls and there is no free parking and premium prices for goods and services.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the importance of small shops is prominent, although, it has some drawbacks which shouldn't be over-looked.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 222, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'shopkeepers'' or 'shopkeeper's'?
Suggestion: shopkeepers'; shopkeeper's
...potential impact of this trend on small shopkeepers income in recent years. It can be agree...
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Line 7, column 144, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
..., although, it has some drawbacks which shouldnt be over-looked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, thus, for example, for instance, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00809716599 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52711370146 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607287449393 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1423177092 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.454545455 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225859083503 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806991493392 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597177662433 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129422848896 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729508223733 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 82.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 74.5 Out of 90
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