The effect of people suffering due to poor health, which was debatable has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of the unhealthy lifestyle has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on people’s well-being. It can be said that detrimental lifestyle can lead to poor health. This essay will elaborate how unhealthy lifestyle of people leads to the deterioration of their health and how medical institutions can help resolve this problem and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are a number of reasons why unhealthy lifestyle of people affects their health, but the most preponderant one is due to the hectic work life where people have no time to take care of their health or indulge in any physical activities. For instance, a study showed that people who work long hours and do not have a proper work-life balance tend to suffer from non-communicable diseases like diabetes, mental illness and cancer to name a few, thanks to their detrimental lifestyle. Furthermore, people tend to pick up bad habits like smoking, drinking and unhealthy diet, many of which have long-run consequences. The relationship between lifestyle and health should, therefore, be highly considered.
Approaches to deal with poor health due to unhealthy lifestyle are numerous, but the most conspicuous one is with the help of medical institutions which is not unattainable and impracticable but feasible and comprehensible. For instance, medical institutes can organize free and regular body check-ups and educate people about the ill effects of leading an unhealthy lifestyle.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that leading an unhealthy lifestyle can lead to deterioration of one’s health, although the way medical institutions can intervene and solve the problem should not be overlooked.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40476190476 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11290651307 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.544686295 50.4703680194 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.454545455 104.977214359 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7272727273 20.9669160288 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457229871555 0.242375264174 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1736151555 0.0925447433944 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610368911122 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277011609731 0.151781067708 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695342983796 0.0609392437508 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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