The mass media, including TV, radio and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people’s ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer.
Mass media is having significant impact on day to day lives of people. From last one decade participation of mass media has been increased enormously. Majorly, mass media include Newspaper, TV, Radio and Internet. In this essay, we will discuss and give an opinion on the effect of mass media on daily lives.
To start with, mass media is having many positive impact on human's life. It keeps us up to date regarding latest news and happenings around us by bombarding information in bulk amount so we no need to go out to get updated. Moreover, it provides and many imperative details like weather report which helps us to know the weather. For example, In Melbourne, weather is unpredictable so people check the weather online and then decide their clothing every day. So, basically mass media is all around us and taken an important role in human's life.
Secondly, apart from many benefits, Mass media also have shortcomings as well. Teenagers are very keen to know about everything and that curiosity leads them to illegal use of mass media. For Instance, many news channels are paid and many businessman and political leaders use this facility for their own profits and spread fake news that leads into violence, disharmony and religious issues.
Mass media is been always helpful but sometimes it had some destructive results as well. So, we need to get rid of false news. Overall, mass media is very crucial to national and international development but is should be having some restrictions by government.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...media is having many positive impact on humans life. It keeps us up to date regarding ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'regarding the latest'.
Suggestion: regarding the latest
... on humans life. It keeps us up to date regarding latest news and happenings around us by bombar...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun businessman seems to be countable; consider using: 'many businessmen'.
Suggestion: many businessmen
...stance, many news channels are paid and many businessman and political leaders use this facility...
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Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...ional and international development but is should be having some restrictions by g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, apart from, for example, for instance, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97254901961 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66220503345 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8075369748 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5333333333 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192214426827 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073887435761 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559823809006 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121160388184 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548660788632 0.0609392437508 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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