Modern technology has a great impact on our environment. Some say that people should adopt a simple lifestyle to solve this problem, while others argue that the technology itself should provide a solution
one of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people arguing that depending of technology. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. HoweveR, I do not entirely agree with this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that dependence on technology to solve problems can not only contribute to improve life style , but it also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only one can get benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they also enhance the quality of their life with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these benefits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence in concerned.
There are, however, some drawbacks that can easily overwhelm the potential benefits of technology dependence. The primary one stems from the fact that by observing the aforementioned trends, people have not only realised its gravity, but also gauged the magnitude of its repercussion, when it comes today’s ever-changing lifestyle. Beside, its impact on is far-reaching indeed. Hence, it is apparent that why many are against of technology.
In view of the arguments, it can be concluded that despite having some drawbacks , the benefits of using technology are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05220883534 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88688573828 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578313253012 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.703996628 50.4703680194 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.363636364 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.25397266985 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139735744037 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539350789488 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425106413453 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884757854129 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198751261301 0.0609392437508 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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