You are given climate as the field of study. Which area will you prefer? Explain why you picked up the particular area for your study?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the numbers of people discussing climate change, thanks to industrialisation. There are i wide range of factors that account for why this is happening. In my opinion, this situation can be remedied provided that effective measures are taken.
There are myriad of reasons for this soaring concern. The most preponderant one is that industrialisation, although it is an evitable phenomenon that stemmed from the requirements to meet the demands of growing population, the adverse impacts associated with this cannot be warranted. Industries and factories pollute the environment by dumping harmful chemicals that pollute the air, water and whatnot. Needless to say, all these demerits of industrialisation have a far-reaching impact on flora and fauna.
Steps to deal with this problem are many, but the most effective ones are not remote or complicate, but accessible and practicable. The primary one stems from the fact that government should introduced stick rules and regulations to deal with issues generated by industrialisation. Only when convergent efforts from all sectors are ensured, can we expect to see a considerable growth in the management of climate change.
In the view of the arguments outline above, one can conclude that the drawbacks of industrialisation indeed too dire t ignore.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42592592593 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37702842565 2.71678728327 124% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638888888889 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4039718654 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.545454545 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.25397266985 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.032163092141 0.242375264174 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0148156147625 0.0925447433944 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230705576932 0.071462118173 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0188525116222 0.151781067708 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184613103834 0.0609392437508 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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