More people consider ‘national happiness index’ as a better measurement for a country’s success than the country’s economic growth. What do you think about the idea? What can be used to measure ‘national happiness’?
A majority section of the society have a view that if the country is doing well "economically" than that country citizens are happier than those of other countries comparatively doing bad. However, it totally wrongs by measuring any country people happiness by their wealth and prosperity. It is an argued by some people that materials luxurious is compulsory for being happy, while others have different opinion, and they counter argue about this opinion. In my opinion, I believe both the aspects are important and should be present for any country to flourish. This essay will elaborate both sides and thus lead to the logical conclusion.
At the outset, currently if we talk to any human being they are not happy with their current-status of life. Moreover, they always try to achieve more in their lives. For example, according to recent survey all over the world it is found that India come at lowest in the ranking. Because people always run behind non-natural things to fulfill their desire.
On the other hand, if any person has to really live peace, calm and happy life. They have to live in the society along with their friends, relatives and dear ones. For instance, Denmark is the country its sit at the top of the table because people invest more of their time with family and spend more of their with nature and family.
In the light of the discussion above, we can infer that any country growth is well-dependent on its economic growth and at the same time its people growth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, really, so, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87984496124 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69200207797 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0738994835 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8461538462 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.25397266985 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245067356992 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725356015443 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891551390127 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128929527848 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969021392359 0.0609392437508 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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