In my countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend has more positive or negative effects on society?
It has long been a subject of discussion whether increasing proportion of older people has positive or negative effects. In my opinion, the former notion has several strong elements that deserve attention and I will explain why using pertinent arguments.
My viewpoint has myriad of arguments. The perceptible one, to start with, lies in the fact that majority of assertions based on unbiased figures obtained from the local and global sources. Not only does it reveal some astonishing facts that prove the point of this trend that proportion of older people has more positive effects on society. For example, in Australia the older people's proportion has a great impact on youngsters. Youngsters got more knowledge and experience from the senior citizens. Self-evidently, all these viewpoint stand this trend in a good stead, as far as society concerned.
Another vital facet of the argument is that, based on the real-time facts and figures. People are taking crucial decisions after considering all associated merits and demerits. Besides a few shortcoming, it is all up to authorities to further educate the people and allow them to take sensible decision. Therefore, it is quite evident that why many are in the favor of my viewpoint.
From what has discussed above, one can conclude that benefits of increasing proportion of older people indeed too great to ignore.
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| 2018-12-26 | Muhammad Khaleeq | 85 | view |
| 2018-12-26 | Muhammad Khaleeq | 85 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 522, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this viewpoint' or 'these viewpoints'?
Suggestion: this viewpoint; these viewpoints
...he senior citizens. Self-evidently, all these viewpoint stand this trend in a good stead, as fa...
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun shortcoming seems to be countable; consider using: 'few shortcomings'.
Suggestion: few shortcomings
...sociated merits and demerits. Besides a few shortcoming, it is all up to authorities to further...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, so, therefore, for example, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22072072072 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81152176848 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626126126126 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5136293679 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1538461538 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0769230769 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334626354166 0.242375264174 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992537679345 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105822971393 0.071462118173 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169506040293 0.151781067708 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102268877277 0.0609392437508 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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