Nowadays, the mass media including TV, radio and newspaper have become the essential part of our lives. What is your opinion?
Although such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on mass media can lead to thought-provoking discussions. My view is that irrespective of the numerous arguments that exist, today we have become dependent on mass media for information and entertainment.
There are a number of reasons in favour of my viewpoint. One of them is that the mass media such as TV, radio and newspaper are great source of information and help people to get updated with the latest news. This is because they broadcast and publish news and information from all around the world as earliest as possible. It is important to note that TV, newspaper and radio connect people throughout the world. It can also be observed that our opinions are shaped by the information we received from various mediums.
There are few aspects of mass media that need special mentioning. Firstly, it is said that mass media such as TV allows people to watch so many programs, movies and sports to entertain themselves. Then there are cases where it also brings all family members together after hectic day and allow them to spend quality time with each other. For instance, a recent study shows that during the international sport events those broadcast on TV people enjoy together to watch on TV and support their favourite team and encourage them.
I see that there is equally potential evidence to support the arguments I have provided and therefore, my opinion is that undoubtedly, mass media such TV, radio and newspaper have become an integral part of our lives by helping people to get latest news and entertain themselves and get relaxed after a hectic day.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'will' and 'yield'.
Suggestion: will never yield
...lthough such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement, a constructive ...
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Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'get the latest'.
Suggestion: get the latest
... part of our lives by helping people to get latest news and entertain themselves and get r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, so, then, therefore, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98936170213 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77636929232 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549645390071 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9172015382 50.4703680194 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276252820036 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958990476221 0.0925447433944 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805250752259 0.071462118173 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174660353248 0.151781067708 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067750223858 0.0609392437508 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.