Nowadays, people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life. Discuss.
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people about the positive and negative effects on the society due to the amount of work an individual complete per day. While it is possible the clam that human must work hard for living, my point of view that the work life and private life should be balanced. In this essay I shall explain my point of view, while analyzing the both sides of the argument.
First and foremost, there are myriad of advantages we can gain, when we balance the work life and personal life. It will increase the family life availability, confidentiality and integrity in to a certain extent. For example, researches have shown that the people who balance the work life and private life have a better health in China. Because of the above point, it is believed that every person who live in this glove must balance the work life and personal life.
On the other hand, people who believe the other side of the argument has a different point of view and say everyone should work hard, because of the modern economy and the usefulness of the modern technology. Fore example, most of the information technology sector employees work hard on weekends and late nights. Therefore, it is believed that the people should work hard without considering the personal life. But, most of the people have health problems and their private life is not quality.
In conclusion, it is strongly believed that the human being should balance private life and work life in a in a hasty manner. In nutshell, it is strongly believed that the professionals’ and government interference is essential to publish this message and reduce the risk in to certain extent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: in a
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...d balance private life and work life in a in a hasty manner. In nutshell, it is s...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a hasty manner" with adverb for "hasty"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...balance private life and work life in a in a hasty manner. In nutshell, it is strongly believed t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8615916955 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65417998636 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.580463131201 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8375691272 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.076923077 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266480933599 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111574803811 0.0925447433944 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675118771695 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165398293891 0.151781067708 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650064986364 0.0609392437508 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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