Nowadays, people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life. Discuss.
In recent years, there is an increasing trend of people working for extended duration often at the cost of their personal lives. While some people believe that it is essential for employees to work extensively hard to survive in this competitive environment, others oppose this idea. This essay will discuss both sides and provide reasons why people must find the right balance between work and personal life for leading a successful life.
To begin with, one strong argument among those that favour the behaviour of workaholics is that it is a necessary prerequisite for a successful career. Our contemporary world has a significant population of over qualified individuals who compete for a limited number of opportunities, which has resulted in a rat race where only the fittest survive. For example, software companies are laying off a large chunk of its employees citing automation and non-productivity of staff. Moreover, superior aspirations and desire for earning handsomely drive people to overwork themselves as businesses become more complicated and demanding.
However, there are several arguments to support the detrimental impacts that excessive work has on one's personal life. Firstly, working beyond office hours is often at the cost of the time one spends with their families, which negatively impacts personal relationships. For instance, children of working parents often develop unfavourable habits due to the lack of attention from parents. In addition, working in stressful professions are a leading cause of cardiovascular diseases like hypertension. Consequently, lack of appreciation or career growth in work coupled with strained relationships result in depression episodes.
To conclude, despite the importance of working hard in today's competitive world, one should strive to find the necessary balance between work and life. In my opinion, allocating sufficient time for both these are imperative to lead a peaceful and healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1207.87684729 139% => OK
No of words: 300.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59333333333 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07390450224 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 139.433497537 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 379.143842365 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.2009852008 50.4703680194 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 119.857142857 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317282650878 0.242375264174 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992770999975 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067915819642 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183580962538 0.151781067708 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731457445388 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 55.0591133005 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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