Nowadays, people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life. Discuss
Recently, the phenomenon of spending a lot of time at work and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of the job opportunities is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that satisfying careers can be a plus, I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, the personal life can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that merits if the normal life, as well as life experiences, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the life cycle. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both learning experiences and the active lifestyle apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, professional life might increase the consequences of seasonal works. Moreover, fundamental aspects of qualified staffs could relate to this reality that the demerits of job offers pertain to low paid jobs. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of workaholics is correlated negatively with permanent employees. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of the temporary staffs.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of full-time workers far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of the well-paid jobs prove the significance of wasting time and energy, but also pinpoint the happy life implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45419847328 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1922934889 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675572519084 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5898240292 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.083333333 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135471365315 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415657593342 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055856566291 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731019312104 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346960156188 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.77 8.32886699507 129% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 55.0591133005 183% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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