Nowadays, television is an essential part of our lives, as a medium to spread news and awareness, and, for some, it even acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this?

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Nowadays, television is an essential part of our lives, as a medium to spread news and awareness, and, for some, it even acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this?

Nowadays, it has become a colossal trend to see that television is an essential part of our lives, as a medium to spread news and awareness so how it is usefull and affect of humans life. There are myriad of reasons for explin this topic. However, in present days television is a common in all homes because without TV people can not get more information and entertainment. In this essay, I shall further elaborate both the sides which would lead to plausible conclusions.

At the outset, there are deluge of arguments which favors to the related topic. Moreover, by achieving further information about how TV useful in our life, let's talk advatages of TV. In 21st generation tv is a main source for information, news, comedy, serials etc.. Childers get extra science knowlwdge from the TV so some time it is helpful for students but it is like habitable for humans. So in some point television is more informatic item but in some stage it is harmful for humans. Furthermore, some people watch TV full days so it is bad for their eye also, so much watch TV they get some point of numbers on their eyes so please aware about it do not watch over on television.

In the flip side, critics argue that by not following standard policy above information it is very bad for all. Furthermore, to reach at the dignified level of the topic noadays, television is an most essential part of our lives because it get all type of entertainment like songs, movie, games all. So it is not a bad thing but yes watch all this for some time when you get some extra and free time.

To recapitulate, from the above mentioned arguments one can conclude that television is an essential part of our live so in my opinion it is great and helpful for people but stink on this is not good so use TV as much as you want.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 328.0 242.827586207 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49695121951 5.00649968141 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58954556006 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512195121951 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.65517241379 246% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.896904601 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.357142857 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262514493955 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932312910184 0.0925447433944 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749632367637 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176263290291 0.151781067708 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459654595902 0.0609392437508 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 11.5310837438 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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