Nowadays Television has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this
Today, the television is found in every house. It has become a major source of entertainment, relaxation, and information for all of us because of the wide range of programs being broadcasted such as news, sports, movies, and documentaries. The television will remain an integral part of our lives.
Firstly, a plethora of options are available through the different TV channels for everyone. One can see a live telecast of football matches, award ceremonies or a jungle safari in Africa. Moreover, all the international news channels are an added advantage for those who want to abreast themselves with the international events.For instance, CNN and BBC are pioneers in covering international events on TV. Therefore, television will remain an integral part of lives.
Secondly, with the advent of technology, a new age of televisions are launched in the market and these are called the smart televisions. As these are preloaded with an operating system such as Android, it gives an opportunity to do a host of activities via television. For instance, video calling through skype, play games and record videos. This capability has extended the usage of TV beyond watching shows and programs.
To sum up, with a variety of programs and smart technology in TV, it will remain a source of entertainment for all of us. In my opinion, it broadcasts a range of programs which fulfill the taste of different community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
...hemselves with the international events.For instance, CNN and BBC are pioneers in c...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12931034483 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09379485218 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594827586207 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.7696468892 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5384615385 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160566747494 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561483896599 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377933732528 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952461606775 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386331667291 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.