Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.
In recent years, there has been a drastic rise in the human population on Earth. Although overpopulation has caused unprecedented stress on the resources of our planet, concrete steps are being undertaken to resolve this existential crisis faced by humankind. This essay will discuss the detrimental effects of this phenomenon and explore solutions to curb it.
To begin with, overpopulation has resulted in a drastic reduction of forest cover including tropical and temperate forests worldwide as they are cleared for creating residential complexes and man-made infrastructures. Consequently, this has shrunk the composition of Oxygen in our atmosphere that is essential for all life to exist. In addition, the unchecked exploitation of the mineral wealth of our planet to satisfy this burgeoning population has caused severe pollution in air, water and soil. Also, groundwater levels in various metropolitan cities have seen tremendous depletion because of unsustainable exploitation of water resources.
However, several solutions are being implemented by governments to mitigate the deleterious effects of overpopulation. Firstly, national parks and forest reserves need to be created away from human settlements to protect biodiversity and forests globally. Furthermore, stringent regulations governing the mining and exploitation of the Earth’s resources should be enforced to limit the pollution caused. Rainwater harvesting techniques, for instance, will enable residents of urban areas to store rainwater and reduce their dependence on groundwater. Family planning is essential to limit the ever-increasing population in all countries.
To conclude, while overpopulation is endangering life and elevating pollution levels, the combined effort of the government and public will help in alleviating the overall impact.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, while, as to, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 5.75862068966 347% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 6.04214559387 5.00649968141 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39482628355 2.71678728327 125% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632183908046 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1845410028 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.307692308 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.25397266985 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0508989446475 0.242375264174 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0166455149447 0.0925447433944 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0199260344405 0.071462118173 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0329908964031 0.151781067708 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018953864675 0.0609392437508 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 53.1260098522 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.75 11.5310837438 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.28 8.32886699507 135% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 55.0591133005 200% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.5123152709 171% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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