Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is YOUR opinion? Support it with personal examples.
Most people claim that parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s deeds. As children often mimic their parents, in my opinion, I strongly believe that parents are legally responsible. In this essay, I will discuss some of the points that will justify my viewpoint.
To begin with, several reasons can be offered to explain why I am in favor of this agreement. Foremost among these is that, children often learn from their parents and it is parent’s responsibility to teach their children morals, values and good deeds. If children fail to learn, parents should make sure they correct and learn from their mistakes. For example, if a child steals a toy from his friend, parents should teach them that stealing is a crime. Thus, the child will slowly inculcate some good habits which will become their inbuilt attitude.
Moreover, if a child accomplishes something, then parents take the credit. Same way if a kid makes a wrong act, then also parents should only be held liable for those acts. Of course, parents only try to teach their children good deeds, but children might emulate or learn things from their surroundings also. So, in such cases parents should make sure they do not follow the wrong path.
Considering all the above points, from my personal perspective, I conclude that parents should be accountable for their children’s acts, and to mold them into better citizens for our future nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
...ponsible. In this essay, I will discuss some of the points that will justify my viewpoint. ...
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Suggestion: as well
...or learn things from their surroundings also. So, in such cases parents should make ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, of course, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05439330544 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63457490437 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585774058577 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3887957397 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9230769231 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42045436068 0.242375264174 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154646540161 0.0925447433944 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122342507627 0.071462118173 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278556101558 0.151781067708 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480893406441 0.0609392437508 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.1260098522 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.9458128079 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 61.0 Out of 90
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