Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples.
Being a parent comes to a great sense of responsibilities towards the child. It is the duty of every parent to discipline their children. Parents are their children’s first mentor, role model or teacher so in my view, should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. Under the law, parents are entitled to monitor and educate their children on what is right and wrong, individually or socially. But it is also a moral and human duty.
Parents should be aware of their children acts or actions. It is quite often that a child can cause harm to someone whether intentionally or unintentionally, in that case, it should be the responsibility of parent towards the other person. Even if the harm is accidental, the consequences can vary from minor to serious. It costs a hefty amount to the victim like in property damage or theft cases. If the child is minor or is not financially supported, then parents are to be held liable to pay for their child’s act. For example, my brother accidentally injured a classmate so my parents compensated the family with his medical bills.
Some people are of the view that it is the child who should be held responsible for their own acts or actions. Though we can not expect parents to present with their child all day long but it is they who have raised their children and infused them with good or bad moral ethics. So for exercising improper supervision and bad control over their children, parents should be held legally responsible, especially when they are not teaching good attitude to their children and encouraging bad conduct. “Positive parenting” should be encouraged and rewarded.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.5418719212 209% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96785714286 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02841770162 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528571428571 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0571229253 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7333333333 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.25397266985 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.492397655414 0.242375264174 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172213719419 0.0925447433944 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119724125716 0.071462118173 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.367556331105 0.151781067708 242% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668723113574 0.0609392437508 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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