Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples.
Most people claim that parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s deeds. As children often mimic their parents, in my opinion, I strongly believe that parents are legally responsible. In this essay, I will discuss some points that will justify my viewpoint.
There are a plethora of factors that I would like to substantiate my view point, but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that, children often learn from their parents in their early age, as they spend most of the time with their parents. Hence, it is parent’s responsibility to teach their children morals, values and good deeds. If children fail to learn, parents should make sure they correct and learn from their mistakes. For example, if a child steals a toy from his friend, parents should teach them that stealing is a crime. Thus, the child will slowly inculcate some good habits which will become their inbuilt attitude.
Moreover, if a child accomplishes something, then parents take the credit. Similarly, if a kid takes a wrong step, then parents should only be liable for those acts. For example, the leading actor Jackie Chan had taken responsibility for his son’s drug use and apologized to public on behalf of him by telling that he failed to be a good father. Although, undeniably, parents try to teach their children good values. But children might emulate or learn things from their surroundings as well. So, in such cases parents should make sure they do not follow the wrong path.
Considering all the above points, from my personal perspective, I conclude that parents should be accountable for their children’s acts, and should mold them into better citizens of our future nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, then, thus, well, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 20.9802955665 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.074204947 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71202737074 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575971731449 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.71428571429 350% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3888877106 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7333333333 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414254251122 0.242375264174 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149142046843 0.0925447433944 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112340248982 0.071462118173 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281568480998 0.151781067708 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472079577635 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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