These days, there is a substantive argument among individuals regarding the reasons for people having a longer life these days. The vast majority of people opine that medical technology is reason behind this, while others refute thus supposition and thinks that it has adverse ramifications. These essay will elucidate the pertinent points of view to come up with a logical conclusion.
Firstly, technology for medical purposes these days are very advance that they can detect the condition or disease a person has with fast and precise results. Clearly, these helps the people that are sick take an action for to improve and cure their sickness at an early stage before it gets harmful. For an instance, when I went to the outpatient services of a hospital and taking some laboratory tests. After a day, they sent me the results and diagnose me with gallbladder stones. Thus, medical technology helps to test and check your current health and prevent it.
On the other hand, Organic medicines or herbal medicines that has no side effects that are out in the market are very popular. People and doctors think that taking supplements or medicines that are organic is very healthy since it has no added substance and it is very natural. To cite a prime example, Harvard University tested organic and herbal medicines that are in the market and proved that the effects of it are more good rather than the laboratory produced supplements or medicine. Hence, herbal and organic medicines boost the health of many people these days.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that medical technology and herbal medicines or supplements help to lengthen the lives of the people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, regarding, so, then, thus, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03971119134 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56820070033 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5559566787 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.609642475 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.384615385 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171778421666 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613589645318 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740612369543 0.071462118173 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103470204875 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844435230112 0.0609392437508 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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