Personal Development is the base for professional development and advancing in one’s career. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent year there has been colossal upsurge in the going debate striking development of one’s personal skills which is the base of professional thrive, be it an impoverished or affluent nation. To some people it is believe that personal improvement will not ascend with all techniques as required, whereas some disagree. In this essay, I will elaborate both merits and demerits of development in skills.
At the outset, there are multitudes of benefits, firstly, in today’s world, technology made easy in learning online, any sources one can taught to learn self can be sort out by all the stuff, material available online. For example, in many multinational companies, engineers are now searching out the documentaries from the website sources which made easier to keep tracking up with the updates in their personal development. Clearly, in doing self-learning practice help them to overcome with critical hindrances which can be tackled independently.
However, there are some pitfalls that can be overwhelmed on potential benefits of personal development. The primary concerns stem from the fact that personal development doesn’t always help to learn personally, it accentuates on some sophisticated technique/skill or strategies and thus keeps them lack of improvement. For instance, students educating in learning things where reach out to some critical problems and fails to crack. Apparently, to some extent personal development has a negative impact.
To recapitulate from the arguments aforementioned, one can conclude that despite of having the positive impacts that personal development is always a key-factor, but the upsides shall look closely into some extent to look in other scenarios of way in improving career benefits and are always indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
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Line 7, column 321, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are always indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, firstly, however, look, so, thus, whereas, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55797101449 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1502159503 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61231884058 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.65517241379 246% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.01194287 50.4703680194 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.454545455 104.977214359 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233919443982 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090962885079 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069780045335 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140751607175 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491251498857 0.0609392437508 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 12.6369458128 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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