Pros and Cons of extreme adventure sports.
The impact of extreme adventure sports, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of sports such as river rafting or skydiving has provoked a contention over the potential impact of this trend on physical injuries. It can be agreed by a few people that extreme sports have some positive impacts, but others claim that it has some negative impacts as well. This essay will elaborate that if we can keep strong safety measures, then these sports can be a thrilling and a life changing experience and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
To begin with, there are numerous reasons why extreme sports such as skiing and bungee jumping can be beneficial for individuals, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that these games can be immensely joyous as well as build confidence. For example, folks who participate in adventure sports can be seen as very happy and confident in their daily lives. Hence, confidence and happiness can play a vital role in playing such adventurous sports
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On the other hand, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to consider that these audacious sports can result in tremendous physical injuries and sometimes even death. To illustrate, several people have lost their lives and broken their bones while participating in bungee jumping or sky diving. Therefore, physical injuries and death can play a vital role in extreme adventure sports.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that, while there are several benefits of extreme adventure sports, but there are unexpected results as well, that should be well handled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11940298507 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64390422359 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59328358209 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9022193699 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.727272727 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.25397266985 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159494788925 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817814519736 0.0925447433944 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940424896495 0.071462118173 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11497869726 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305315279588 0.0609392437508 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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