Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Others believe that companies and industries should remain in more urban areas.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
In recent times, the phenomenon of companies and industries moving to regional places and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate around the world. Although contested by many that the matter of companies and industries staying back in urban areas are highly beneficial, such issue is regarded as both constructive and consequently positive by a substantial number of individuals. However, I am inclined to believe that there are many advantages of relocating big companies to regional venues, and I will explain my point by discussing both sides of the arguments.
At the outset and from a general standpoint, regional parts are the best places for these big companies and factories since it provides the benefits to cities such as less population, low pollution levels and decreased deterioration on city infrastructure. To illustrate, according to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered that people in both urban areas and towns showed higher level of satisfaction when large corporates decided to move outside of urban centers. Thus beneficial ramifications of improved people lifestyle and positive environmental conditions both apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of the public arena, large companies and industries in urban areas have worsened the life of individuals as people have to encounter myriad issues such as traffic snarls, bad quality of air and congested houses. For example, scientific research conducted by a prominent university has asserted that the location of enormous organizations is correlated negatively with a better quality of life. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of this remarkable phenomenon.
To recapitulate, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of companies and industries moving to regional locations far outweigh its drawbacks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, consequently, hence, however, if, thus, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1207.87684729 137% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58108108108 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18339343957 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601351351351 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 379.143842365 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.1583175958 50.4703680194 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.2 104.977214359 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6 20.9669160288 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330718886414 0.242375264174 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107442791657 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586898379593 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179029171082 0.151781067708 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248464874686 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 12.6369458128 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.12 53.1260098522 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 10.9458128079 155% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.32886699507 126% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 55.0591133005 183% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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