As a result of advance in medical care, average life expectancy is increasing for men and women. Do you think most people will see this as a positive, development? What are the disadvantages of an ageing population for individuals and society? Support your points of view with reasons and examples from your own experience or observations?
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people about the positive and negative effects on the society due to aging and medical care. While it is possible to calm that increase life expectancy as additional weight for the society, my point of view is that the advantages of aging outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analyzing the disadvantages and advantages of aging.
First and foremost, there are myriad of advantages a society can gain because of old people such as grandmothers and grandfathers. It will increase the young generation confidentiality, integrity and social availability for life expectancy. On the other hand, aging will increase the heritage and inheritance also. For example, Chinese and Japanese people have aged from the last decade because of medicine, but they are still the most powerful countries in the world. Therefore, it is taken into account that the increase in life expectancy in medical care as an essential factor for a society or country.
On the other hand, those who believe the other side of the argument has a different point of view and say aging increase an additional responsibility and accountability for the young generation. Without thinking of new technologies and new innovations, young people have to look after their old generation. Therefore it is believed that the average life expectancy increment adds additional accountability for the new society. But, the government can use the knowledge of the old generation for a sustainable development.
In conclusion, it is believed that the life expectancy should be increased as much and as soon as we can by using modern medical tools and techniques. In nutshell, it is important that the professional’s and government interference is essential for this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24914675768 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23393922942 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505119453925 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6554312327 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.857142857 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323354401647 0.242375264174 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111967987794 0.0925447433944 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547826040709 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194527617608 0.151781067708 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566084712769 0.0609392437508 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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