With the rise in use of internet facilities result in generation of several problem in our society. Discuss the problem and its solution ?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is colossal upsurge in the use of internet in all over
the world. There are a wide range of factors that account for why this is happening. In my opinion, this
hassles can be remedies provided that effective measures are taken. However, I believe that people can access
more information via the internet is most beneficial to everyone, although it can create some hassles, if
it is used improperly. I will discuss my notions in upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, I would like to say that today we are able to find any types of single question as well as
Complex queries on internet. Moreover, technological advancements allow people
to gain more knowledge and information of happening around the world in fraction of second.
Furthermore, Online shopping and banking have saved a masses great deal of time and efforts. People
can contact with their family, colleague and friends faster and more efficiently than in the past. They can
convey massages any time in a second, which was not be possible in ancient time.
On the other hand, there are several arguments in favour of my stance. One of the most preponderant ones is that young generation spends their expensive time at internet it can be affected on their education. In recent time, once American bank hacked by hacker he withdraw money of inhabitants of America. Moreover, the Internet can be addictive, especially to young people who always need communicate with others by using too much that takes a lot of their time.
To sum up, internet has more beneficial to everyone’s personal life, if we use it proper way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 53, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a mass', 'a masse' or simply 'masses'?
Suggestion: a mass; a masse; masses
... Online shopping and banking have saved a masses great deal of time and efforts. People ...
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Line 11, column 53, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ges any time in a second, which was not be possible in ancient time. On the oth...
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Line 13, column 230, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on their education. In recent time, once American bank hacked by hacker he withdr...
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Line 13, column 266, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'withdraws'.
Suggestion: withdraws
...once American bank hacked by hacker he withdraw money of inhabitants of America. Moreov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 279.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96774193548 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79149578354 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609318996416 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5727402648 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.12807881773 315% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103044584399 0.242375264174 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337697497805 0.0925447433944 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304293677986 0.071462118173 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0343223174424 0.151781067708 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363041058789 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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