Should extreme sports be supported or not?
The subject of participating in extreme sports and whether these kinds of activities should be supported or not has always been interesting to many. Some are of the opinion that these types of sports should be encouraged since they have positive benefits such as building self-esteem. some others, however, beg to differ and they think that they should be banned as they cause serious injuries. this essay will examine both points of view.
It would appear that participation in extreme sports is absolutely beneficial psychologically. In fact, in the light of scientific research which was conducted at the University of Tehran, those people who are involved with extreme sports are more likely to improve their lifestyle. The reason is that by doing such practices regularly not only people cab face their fears more easily but also it enables them to discovers their potentials and hence build their confidence. Therefore, it is recommended by some psychologist to participate in extreme sports.
However, it does not necessarily follow that these types of sports do not have disadvantages. In fact, the extreme sports like parachuting, skiing, bungee jumping and so forth are very dangerous. for instance, if one who is practicing parachuting cannot open it, it will definitely lead to his death. Hence, the more is an extreme sport is dangerous, the more cautionary actions need to be taken to elaborate its safety standards, otherwise, it may lead to a tragedy and irrecoverable health problems.
To conclude, While some people only consider the advantages of participating in extreme sports like boosting self-confidence, I believe that we should put its dangers into consideration. the reason is that doing a mistake in such activities might be a tragedy and lead to the loss of lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21034482759 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01034482759 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58275862069 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3364470642 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.928571429 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402056332769 0.242375264174 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129393119596 0.0925447433944 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111595446264 0.071462118173 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230381147045 0.151781067708 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087029101729 0.0609392437508 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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