Should voting be compulsory for all citizens or people should have freedom to choose not to vote. What is your opinion?
It is irrefutable that mandatory voting has become one of the most conspicuous trends of today's world among most of the privileged nation, but whether it is a positive development or negative is a controversial issue. So it is little difficult to comment on it. Some people ponder it has benefitted people in a plethora of ways, and I sternly agree with it.
There are many factors which I would consider to substantiate my view. The most preponderant one stems from the fact that by using their democratic right, people can select a person who is wise and honest. Moreover, citizens can not only refuse to vote a person who is not accountable or responsible for their society, but they also have the ability to choose strong government for the entire nation. Needless to say, all these merits stand people in good stead as far as sound government and efficient management os concerned.
Shifting toward another school of thoughts, many concede that it does not seems to be fair for someone penalise or force for voting. It should be their own choice. However, it is evident that the countries who have system of compulsory voting in their province have low voting turnouts and more likely to choose best candidate, because majority can not be take wrong decision.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of compulsory voting are indeed too great to ignore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider substantiating'.
Suggestion: consider substantiating
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Message: Did you mean 'seem'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: seem
...thoughts, many concede that it does not seems to be fair for someone penalise or for...
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Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'seem'
Suggestion: seem
...thoughts, many concede that it does not seems to be fair for someone penalise or for...
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Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'penalises'.
Suggestion: penalises
...t does not seems to be fair for someone penalise or force for voting. It should be thei...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...seems to be fair for someone penalise or force for voting. It should be their own...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'choose the best'.
Suggestion: choose the best
... low voting turnouts and more likely to choose best candidate, because majority can not be ...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to best', 'to well'
Suggestion: to best; to well
...ting turnouts and more likely to choose best candidate, because majority can not be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87447698745 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66121943834 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627615062762 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7667264325 50.4703680194 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.909090909 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 7.25397266985 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303451532713 0.242375264174 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090740498368 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074638370455 0.071462118173 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155654491089 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829872767733 0.0609392437508 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 79.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.