“The solution to the overpopulation of this planet is education.”
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
World population has doubled in last one century. To contain the problem of overpopulation, some people think that educating people is necessary. This easy will discuss how education along with other measures is necessary to contain the overpopulation problem of the world.
World population is increasing day by day and this trend is very high especially in third world countries. Education is an effective way to fight against overpopulation. Governments should arrange necessary programs to educate their people about the benefits of small families and problems of bigger families. For examples, in Pakistan government educate people about the benefits of family planning with the help of electronic media and lady doctors. Educating people about family planning helped the government in Pakistan to reduce the birth rate.
Overpopulation is a worldwide problem and it should be tackled in an effective way. In addition to educating people about overpopulation problems, governments should take other necessary measures to contain this problem. For example, in China, the government has limited the number of babies one family can have. This helped China to control its population.
Our planet has overpopulated and this has caused various problems like food and health. This easy discussed why education is important to control the population of this planet. I believe that educating people along with other measures are necessary.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an effective way" with adverb for "effective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ldwide problem and it should be tackled in an effective way. In addition to educating people about ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, third, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55909090909 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95954472152 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518181818182 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9908134083 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.5333333333 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 20.9669160288 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 7.25397266985 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118076523095 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506278445093 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555262619216 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979018704379 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605229710222 0.0609392437508 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 53.1260098522 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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