• Some countries encourage teenagers to have part-time job and see it as a good thing, while others disagree. Give your opinion and explain both views.
Some nations are encouraging young generations to exposed themselves to part-time occupation and claimed that it has benefits among them, however, the opposition believe otherwise. In my point of view, having a career at such an early age would lead to gaining significant experience for the former but will reduce concentration on studies for the latter.
To begin with, juniors are becoming more opportunistic when it comes to learning. As a result, they may find ways to obtain knowledge from their surroundings. The best information that they could get is from the workplace. Earning vital experience in a work setting could help them adjust and be more ready for the demands of their future undertakings. For example, Chinese children are already working for their parents in their family business, seeing them more responsible and disciplined people.
On the other hand, people also see that working students can have negative effects on their priorities. They might possibly be lacking focus on their studies due to several responsibilities outside school. This can be illustrated by the years of finishing college evident from pupils who are at the same time are employed.
To recapitulate, it is for a fact that young individuals can widen their horizons in life through accepting a job while still completing their degree. Yet, it can also give them distraction. In the end, it will all depend on the attitude and determination of the person achieving the fruits of his labor.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: MIGHT_PERHAPS[1]
Message: Use simply 'might', 'possibly'.
Suggestion: might; possibly
...ative effects on their priorities. They might possibly be lacking focus on their studies due t...
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Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'might'.
Suggestion: might
...ative effects on their priorities. They might possibly be lacking focus on their studies due t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, while, for example, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1652892562 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91743731302 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657024793388 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7106981854 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1538461538 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.25397266985 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0932592439735 0.242375264174 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310154394971 0.0925447433944 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390053748137 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0588616720266 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302879596983 0.0609392437508 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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