Some democrats claim that people who do not take part in voting processes do not have the right to complaint about the situation their communities are in. What is your position regarding this opinion?
the issue of voting system has become a matter of discussion for quit some years now. Although, some quarters of the society are engaged in discussing this vital topic. Yet, there has been no substantial result. Likewise, some individuals, think that the people who do not participate in the voting system, they do not have any right to complaint against any situation. I will discuss some points to support this topic in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, nowadays, we are living in democratic system, where every person has equal rights and they can choose their leader by voting system, whereas some people do not take part in voting process but it is not good for them, because some corrupt leaders will enter in politics and they will also become ministers easily, that is very bad for country. Moreover, crime rate will be increased like corruption and dishonesty and they will also stop the developmet of nation, due to which country will become poor and the raito of illiteracy will be reached at the peak point.
On the other hand, some people think that sometime when they do not get justice, they are discouraged from voting system. Furthermore, in this era all people have equal rights, if anyone will not complaint against any situation, them others will behave badly against him, due to which he have to face some problems.
In conclusion, every coin has two sides, likewise this topic also has mixed bag. But according to my opinion, government should improve the voting system and they should make strict rules who demotivate others from voting.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...have badly against him, due to which he have to face some problems. In conclusion,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, whereas, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91320754717 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39640171696 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596226415094 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.8947077907 50.4703680194 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.363636364 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.25397266985 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247015276655 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093685051329 0.0925447433944 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820162558876 0.071462118173 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150862123428 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560879943513 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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