Some people believe that exploring outer space is important. Other people believe that space exploration is a waste of money.
I believe that space exploration has its advantages and its disadvantages. However, I feel that its disadvantages
outweigh its advantages.
Firstly, many people argue that the universe is so big and that it would be an awful waste of space if we were
the only ones occupying it and it is for this reason that we should explore new frontiers in the space. I do not
agree with this stance because we have enough to discover here on our planet as it stands. There are uncharted
territories and breath-taking vistas that we have yet to encounter or even species of flora and fauna that have
yet to be identified.
Secondly, there is talk of us humans having so much to learn from the universe and that the cure for our diseases
and pain is out there somewhere in the universe. If we were to look at the amount of money being pumped into
space exploration we will see that billions of dollars are essentially being 'wasted'. Back in the 1950s there was
the 'Space Race' between Russia and the USA to put the first man into space. All the money spent on the race
could have been put to much better use i.e. preventing world poverty. I firmly believe that money spent on space
could be spent on much more important research here on earth such as finding a cure for cancer or even just
better quality of life in third world countries.
In conclusion there are still many things to do here on our beautiful planet. As humans we are the only species
that does not contribute to the ecosystem -we make things worse off for everyone. I think we should work
towards making our planet a better place instead of just looking for a replacement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 50, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...is out there somewhere in the universe. If we were to look at the amount of money ...
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Line 12, column 21, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... spent on the race could have been put to much better use i.e. preventing world p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, third, i feel, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 20.9802955665 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56902356902 5.00649968141 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47805500587 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531986531987 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8159425497 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.384615385 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.12807881773 412% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197502761185 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689769003423 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918526861204 0.071462118173 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0571858994181 0.151781067708 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748643563077 0.0609392437508 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 53.1260098522 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.5310837438 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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