Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is establishing new laws and trying to change human's behavior from them. There is a wide spread worry that this would lead to a myriad of concerns in nation's behavior. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious consideration.
There are numerous arguments in favour of my stance. The most post preponderant one is that these rigorous rule can make fear among human's mind on offences. Hence, they can be tried to avoid from illegal tasks and wrong things. Not only, can law raise person's life style to better way, but it change one's thinking ways and mind to good way. Needless to say, these merits stand younger, elder or even dangerous persons in good stead, as far as making their behaviour and attitudes as well.
Another pivotal aspect is that, when either parents or teachers can be taught to children about rules and policies, they can practice according to a rule set from their childhood. then, we will be able to reduce lot of offences and enhance human behavior.
In view of the argument outlined above, one can conclude that despite of some drawbacks, the benefits of rules and regulations too great to ignore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'changes'?
Suggestion: changes
...ersons life style to better way, but it change ones thinking ways and mind to good way...
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Suggestion: Then
...ing to a rule set from their childhood. then, we will be able to reduce lot of offen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 1207.87684729 83% => OK
No of words: 206.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84466019417 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50300978217 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669902912621 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 379.143842365 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9896121223 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7272727273 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120902844324 0.242375264174 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445921716413 0.0925447433944 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556398860662 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072162259204 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426244641622 0.0609392437508 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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