Some people think human behaviors can be limited by laws, others think laws have little effect. What is your
opinion?
It has long been a subject of discussion whether law effected the human behaviour or not. In my opinion,
the former notion has several elements that deserve attention and I will
explain why using pertinent arguments.
There are myriad of arguments in favour of my context, and the most
conspicuous one lies in the fact that people should be extra careful with their
decision. For example, according to a recent survey done by the Standford
University, 45% people benefit from the above mentioned notion, whereas
30% people face disadvantages due to it. Hence it is apparent why many
citizens are in favour of the above stance.
Another argument in support of my view is that governments worldwide have
become more active in dealing with this situation. To illustrate, as per a recent
academic research carried out by Australian Government, 60% citizens gained
immensely from the proposed government reforms. They improved their
existing scenario tremendously and that paved the way for a better economic
future. Therefore, not only will this make people more careful and pragmatic in
their approach, but also will it lead to a better living standard.
From what has been discussed above, it is clear that the benefits of the given
topic significantly outweigh the drawbacks.Lastly, in my opinion, it would be
wisely to say that law has change the human behaviour.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, lastly, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23660714286 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82977616277 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647321428571 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7824081725 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.3 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.12807881773 460% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141040984305 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500609266731 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057008206593 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.035521332158 0.151781067708 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523633313466 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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