Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both opinion and give example.
Now day’s people keep animals in their houses more people keep pet dogs for security and for play. In historical period people do not use dogs as a pet or as a security. The dogs of earlier time always live in street and people give feed what they want to feed. A typical day reveals keeping pets has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. I will discuss both view-point of this statement.
Firstly, dogs are very good for human being. Moreover dogs are very loyal and faithful they never ditch their owner and they love their owner. Moreover children like the small dogs much because the small dogs play with child enjoy with them and always think that child be a safe when he or she playing with the dog or with other child. After that people also get maintain their body because they go for walk daily with their dog because dogs want a day and night walk daily that’s way people also become healthy. For example 30% dogs save the child's life in Canada.
On the other hand, dogs are good but some dogs like pit-bull and American bully. These dogs harm the people like they bite house members including owners. Moreover these dogs are not good for children. For example in America 40% dangerous dogs badly bite the people also some people were died after this incident.
To conclude, I think that people should keep pets like small dogs or pets as birds if they properly take care of dogs
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, while, for example, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59636363636 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06574261756 2.71678728327 76% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527272727273 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.9 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9176555135 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273702013212 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119605519318 0.0925447433944 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133884427488 0.071462118173 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197137087468 0.151781067708 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107376623308 0.0609392437508 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 12.6369458128 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.1260098522 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 11.5310837438 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.32886699507 81% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 55.0591133005 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.0 Out of 90
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