Some people think law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
Recently, The phenomenon of behaviour changes and its corresponding sparked a heated debate. Although contested by any that (law cannot build up a human's personality and this issue is regarded both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that law implementation for human discipline and behavior can be a plus and I will analyze it through this essay.
To begin with, from sociological standpoint, law can provide society with some noticeable effects which is rooted in the fact that fear of being punished and paying fines are inextricably bound up. As a university student, I conducted an experiment which discovered that human nature and attitude can be changed if the factor of fear is involved. Thus, beneficial ramification can be seen apparently.
In contrast, on the realm of psychology, crime might increase the non-abiding attitude . Moreover, fundamental aspect of fines and punish relate to this reality that demerits of rage and rebel may occur. As a tangible example, a research undertaken by students of prestigious university has asserted the downside of rues and regulation at early age is correlated negatively with not having social and friendly behavior in society. Hence,it is presume the preconceived notion of law changing behavior is correct.
To recapitulate, while there are compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly agree that certainly law changes human behavior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41850220264 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15763887852 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665198237885 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4226762577 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.818181818 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222761242192 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802632250669 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793299093377 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14838914425 0.151781067708 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731599183709 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.47 8.32886699507 126% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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