Some people think that life experience is more important than the formal education provided in schools and
universities. How far do you agree with this statement, and provide examples?
Nowadays, whether real life experience outweighs the formal education provided has attracted numerous controversies and drawn the attention of the general public. Some consider that life experience is immensely more valuable compared to the theories learned from school, while others hold the view that knowledge obtained from education is just as crucial. In my opinion, I am inclined towards life experience being more beneficial than theories learned from schools.
Unquestionably, the real world is extremely complex as there are always new problems that arise. It has always been difficult in the transition phase of life, especially from school to work. Moreover, the real world is cruel and a lot of times the theories learnt from schools could not be applied which could be particularly frustrating. For example, after graduation I started work as a podiatrist and the skills I acquired in university were useless and ineffective on many occasions.
Moreover, another factor that should be considered is the stressful environment. It is a general perception that students experience less stress and encounter less problems than workers. For most of them, they do not need to worry about the financial stress, their primary concerns are assignments and examinations.
In conclusion, I hold the view that real life experience is more important than the formal education provided in institutes because of the complexity of the real world and that the stress of students is only a fraction of what workers perceive. To address these issues, governments and society should make concerted effort to seek solutions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...oversies and drawn the attention of the general public. Some consider that life experience is ...
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Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun problems is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ts experience less stress and encounter less problems than workers. For most of them...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4347826087 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93107456622 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584980237154 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2466214982 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.583333333 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22312704497 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717925052251 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721366831863 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12812828916 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798941398459 0.0609392437508 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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