Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress, and how can we reduce it?
In recent decades, there has been considerable debate regarding the existing of stresses in the world. I firmly concur with the opinion that although some factors contribute to this much of stress, we must reduce it. The important reasons that contribute significantly are long working hours and terrible economic in the world, and we can alleviate these stresses with the balance between life and work.
To begin with, the important causes and reasons for these anxieties are the long hours that people work beside the bad economy. From my personal experience, a qualitative analysis was conducted by an eminent sociologist to explore further employer and the less payment and expenses. Subsequently, final results revealed that there is a highly complex relationship between expensive cities and further purchases even though the cost of living should be taken into consideration. Thus, people can be fully informed about sufficient evidence of a causal link between long working hours and the economy and a sad person.
Furthermore, with balancing between being at work and at home, you can reduce this pressure and depression and anxiety. For instance, quantitative research was carried out at the Melbourne University concerning the upset children and its impact. Hence, perhaps if scientific research is significantly correlated with the fewer times at workplace, the preliminary findings will be closely associated with more happiness.
To recapitulate, according to the preceding discussion, I am inclined to believe that in this society, the economy and the long working hours engender anxiety and stress, which with a balance between them human can be happy. Moreover, not only should national institutions endeavour to discern, but also they should be cognizant of encouraging the individuals to be happy.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45390070922 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91317614326 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613475177305 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5828454299 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.166666667 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146590190466 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607891721114 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733355065877 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988871660653 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977261351533 0.0609392437508 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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