In today’s world, different governments and international organisations are confronting many problems to deal with. What is the most pressing problem among them? How can it be taken care of?
recently, the phenomenon of world government and international organisations confronting many problems and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. In my opinion, the most pressing problem is the pollution which stands the biggest of all. this essay will elaborate the problems caused by pollution and how utmost care should people take to avoid it.
To begin with, there are myriad of consequences from pollution we are faced in our planet. The most conspicuous one lies in the fact that pollutants from industries and others sources deteriorate our environment. Moreover, not only they have adverse effect on our ecology, they give rise to plethora of diseases among us. For example, According to recent survey taken by the University of Monash, chemicals released from industries risked the life of living things. Needless to say, all these has diverse affects on our planet.
On the other hand, there are plethora of steps to deal with pollution. The most preponderant one lies in the fact that governments should take stringent laws and people should abide by the laws. Probing further, industries should keep smoke purifier and should take utmost care to protect the life of people as well as living organisms. For example, a recent study from Oxford university showed that by proper rules and laws pollution has decreased to a certain limit. Therefore, governments should introduce eco- friendly measures to protect the environment.
In recapitulation, this essay has discussed the most pressing problem which is the pollution. In my opinion, every individual and government should take necessary steps and measures to deal with the problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36742424242 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84214871944 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9455417875 50.4703680194 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.4666666667 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219358334753 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072698325672 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708980766601 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147915947856 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100741239466 0.0609392437508 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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