You are given climate as the field of study. Which area will you prefer? Explain why have you picked up the particular area for your study.
Global climate change is a major threatening issue affecting all aspects of our life in the world. Therefore, if I was given climate as my field of study, I would like to study the reasons for global climate change issue and solutions to curb them.
First of all, there is a reason for choosing this particular area of study. The global temperature continuously increasing and we have experienced the hottest climate throughout the year. Due to the rise in temperature, millions of people are at risk of heavy rainfalls, severe floods, hazardous air pollution, drinking water shortages and droughts. Global warming has disrupted the terrestrial ecosystems and many species are in danger of extinction. For example, the extinction of mosaic tailed rat in Australia is a potential loss to our environment. Because of above mentioned reasons, the issues of climate change must be addressed with a sense of urgency.
Second of all, global warming is a result of human activity. Every single person should contribute in the process of reducing the greenhouse gas emission. For instance, using cycles, car-pooling and public transport instead of private vehicles will gradually reduce the carbon gas emission in air. Further, replacing plastic bags by using cloth bags and minimizing gas and electricity consumption by installing solar energy generation systems will significantly decrease their carbon footprints in the earth.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that the roles of individuals are important to combat this global issue. Further, it is expected that the people make cognizance of the fact and should start implementing simple changes in their lives to make this world a better place to live for their posterities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34296028881 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90656543249 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635379061372 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4342976338 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.714285714 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130885379558 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435654349128 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650924477928 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739173327964 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509355225542 0.0609392437508 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 55.0591133005 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.