In today's world different government and international organizations are confronting many problems. What is the most pressing problem among them?
The world's population has increased to high extent. Increased population creates more problems which need to be resolved. These days, there is an ongoing debate that what are the main problems, government and international organizations, are confronting. In this essay, I will provide some of the problems faced by them.
Quality education is the main and significant problem the government and these organizations are facing. Due to increase in number of people, it is very difficult for government schools and colleges to cater all the students. For instance, according to a survey done in early 21st century revealed that in developed countries the number of students learning in one class room is around fifty. Hence, it is very impossible for teachers to pay attention on each student. Thus, most of the students do not feel teachers are providing any help to them.
Similarly, governance in these institutions is another problem faced by government body whether it is education or health sector. Weak governance results in the corruption of money and time. For example, a study done in the University of Texas showed that corruption in government institutes is high in number. The high rate of corruption is due to non-existence of governance body. Therefore, when an employee knows that not enough system of accountability exists than its performance is degraded eventually.
In a nutshell, government and international organizations are confronting many problems. The essay discussed the key problems faced by these organizations and its deleterious effects of the society in long term.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
The worlds population has increased to high extent...
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Line 1, column 286, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...fronting. In this essay, I will provide some of the problems faced by them. Quality educ...
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Line 5, column 297, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: high
... corruption in government institutes is high in number. The high rate of corruption is due to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, similarly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 5.75862068966 347% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37301587302 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14882390151 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575396825397 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9765539106 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.625 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25523885645 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867030463299 0.0925447433944 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981460487166 0.071462118173 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164229799421 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766906617709 0.0609392437508 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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