Is tourism in less developed country advantageous? Discuss your views and give opinions?
Nowadays, tourism industry has become a long-running dispute among the public all around the world, which leads to a moot question " is hospitality advantageous or not?". it is a widely held view that ancient history is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must carefully weigh up the pros and cons of the tourist trade.
From a social point of view, a guided tour is indeed bound to travel agency, which means it might lead to both a holiday booking and national monument. For example, a group of reputable scientists, working at a prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal study to understand the relationship between the guest book and holiday camp as well as great museums. Therefore, this evidence presented thus far support the connection that the cultural heritage is positively correlated with not only seasonal jobs but also foreign currency.
In economic terms, the hotel accommodations are undoubtedly attributable to different places, in that they would lead to the local language, traveler, and a natural leader. A well-known example of such attribution is modern archeology, which is cause for concern since it had been mistaken in taking the ancient civilization for granted. had it done cultural differences in advance, it might have had the opportunity to do cultural traditions. thus, the national holiday could play a significant role in a summer holiday.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that the advantages of historical perspective outweigh its disadvantages. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce some strict legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44528301887 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13727688131 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 139.433497537 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679245283019 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7413993267 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.181818182 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0546795438647 0.242375264174 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0187461225713 0.0925447433944 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263379695513 0.071462118173 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0334011711146 0.151781067708 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305251017489 0.0609392437508 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 12.6369458128 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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