Using of Over-packed food could be bad. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
usage of over - packaged food have become a major concern in the modern world. most of the people who are professional job employees more prefer these kind of over packaged food items for their time-saving. The health problems that we need to face in the future due to the continuous use of this tinned food is a debatable topic. The essay will discuss why over packaged food are not so good for better health.
In this fast pace society, most of the people prefer to have freezed food items or packed food daily. because, those items can be keep it safe for many days in refrigerator. The consequences are behind this kind of activities are not aware of the people. For instance, we can get more toned milk and some other products these over- packaged food has preservatives to prevent its decay and to keep away from the microorganisms. Whereas this can damage our health as it has chemicals.
However, marketing of products have more profits because of the more consumers and can easily exported to various countries. Though we can get all things as we want, there are so many dreaded diseases are following us with the over usage.
The use of over-packaged food items are good because something is better than nothing. But over usage of any kind of things may harm for health. this can lead to many health issues and may lead to death. In my opinion, the usage of over-packaged food are harmful to health, so government should take a necessary actions to cut its marketing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... so government should take a necessary actions to cut its marketing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, may, so, whereas, for instance, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70114942529 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56152371926 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540229885057 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.966245363 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.25397266985 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150400011764 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575401218869 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439924742575 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095521543246 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441571145568 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 11.5310837438 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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